Thursday, 18 August 2016

moment in time | Soccer Training

 My Reflection
I was learning to use my five senses to add detail to my writing. I found this easy because the sentence was short. In this activity I had to use most of the senses. My next steps are to add more interesting words.

Wednesday, 17 August 2016

HOCKEY SKILLS

My Reflection
IAL some hockey skills.
I need to work on taking the ball off the people.
I enjoyed taking the ball off people.

Tuesday, 9 August 2016

100 word chanallenge

What a nice day in my wooden house, in the forest. I walked and feel into a dark cave ¨HAAAAAAAAAAA!¨ I said as I feel into the dark cave dun dun dun! I kept my hand on my side then splat! slime got stuck in my face ¨ Oh that does not feel good¨ I said. I kept my hands in front of me and what was that I could feel? ¨ HAAAAAAAAAAA IT IS SLENDER MAN. I sprinted as fast as I could and I  found light, I grabbed it and it was a torch. ¨HAAAAAAAAA!¨ Slender man got meeeeeee!
My Reflection I was learning to use parts of speech to add interest and detail to my writing. I found this easy because you only have to do 100 words. In this activity I had to have 3 or more describing words.
My next steps in my writing are to have 100 words and I only 99 words.