100 word challenge -key in the grass

I rushed out the front door and before I started playing I saw a key. It was so shiny that it almost blended in the grass. I told my parents,and my parents said'' you should give it to John Key''. I said ''OK''. So my mum,dad and me went in the car. We went to John Key. He told everyone on TV. The guy that dropped the key came to get it, so he asked  John Key that he could have the key and John key said''yes you can''.So the guy said''thank you''.

                                                                My Reflection
                                                         WALT: use describing words
                                                               to give our writing more
                                                                         meaning
                                                              
                                                           I think  my story makes  seance.
                                                           I need to work on describing words.

WALT:Brainstorm and write a poem using simple imagery:Publish our poems using google slides

My Reflection I was learning to write a Did You Ever poem.
  It was easy because you have think of the naons. I need to work on the photo XD

My Welcome Post 2016

Welcome to my year 4 learning blog.This year I am in room 15 and my teacher is Miss Massey. I enjoy playing Minecraft. This year I am looking forward to make some new friends. I hope you will enjoy my blog and leave lots of feedback:D.