100 word challenge -key in the grass

I rushed out the front door and before I started playing I saw a key. It was so shiny that it almost blended in the grass. I told my parents,and my parents said'' you should give it to John Key''. I said ''OK''. So my mum,dad and me went in the car. We went to John Key. He told everyone on TV. The guy that dropped the key came to get it, so he asked  John Key that he could have the key and John key said''yes you can''.So the guy said''thank you''.

                                                                My Reflection
                                                         WALT: use describing words
                                                               to give our writing more
                                                                         meaning
                                                              
                                                           I think  my story makes  seance.
                                                           I need to work on describing words.